The Song

July 30, 2010
By ithinkijustflew BRONZE, Dreamland, Other
ithinkijustflew BRONZE, Dreamland, Other
4 articles 1 photo 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Is. 43:2; When you pass through the waters, I will be with you.

I switch it "on",
My favorite song,
Something overwhelms me.
Like a tsunami
And I'm in the middle of it
Sorry, but there's no way out.
First beat, I'm hooked
Don't care if they looked.
My legs can't help but extend; bend.
My long hair can't help it;
It refuses to stand still.
Just like the song.
Sorry, world
I think I'm gone
I was captured in a net
Called simply, "Song".

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This article has 3 comments.

on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:51 am
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

There is just one word that describes this poem and it is , amazing. Great job! I loved it! You should definitely write more poems like this. :)

on Sep. 18 2010 at 10:05 am
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

This is beautiful. Wonderful job. Please keep on writing! If you get the chance, can you please read and critique my newest article called "Keeping Faith" It would mean a lot. Thanks so much!

on Aug. 25 2010 at 6:09 pm
MidnightWriter SILVER, Ontario, Other
6 articles 0 photos 225 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writers are a less dangerous version of the career criminal. Everywhere they go, they see the potential for the perfect crime. The difference is that writers have better self control.

It's lovely.


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