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I switch it "on",
My favorite song,
Something overwhelms me.
Like a tsunami
And I'm in the middle of it
Sorry, but there's no way out.
First beat, I'm hooked
Don't care if they looked.
My legs can't help but extend; bend.
My long hair can't help it;
It refuses to stand still.
Just like the song.
Sorry, world
I think I'm gone
I was captured in a net
Called simply, "Song".





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ilovewriting95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 11:51 am
There is just one word that describes this poem and it is , amazing. Great job! I loved it! You should definitely write more poems like this. :)
 
elfiewrites said...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 10:05 am
This is beautiful. Wonderful job. Please keep on writing! If you get the chance, can you please read and critique my newest article called "Keeping Faith" It would mean a lot. Thanks so much!
 
CanadianRoseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 6:09 pm
It's lovely.
 
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