April 23, 2010
By Ostolaza SILVER, Bluffton, South Carolina
Ostolaza SILVER, Bluffton, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I think that if your writing is good for you then its the best it can be.

There is a time when you fall in love. Everyone must go pass it as they grow. If only they know that sometimes you end up with your heart broken. So to not suffer try to live with your heart locked. If you open it will have the most chances of getting broken. But then again we all must fall in love and get our heart broken if not what have we have learned? It will be as if not knowing anything of love. Sometimes a risk can hurt but you can learned so much about it.

The author's comments:
sometimes love will not go as plan, But it comes with some benefit.

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This article has 6 comments.

babbigurll said...
on Nov. 30 2010 at 12:22 am
you never wanna believe it but you of corse relize that its truen end up wit dat crumpled heart. i luved dis poem , well den again u do good in all of demm =) <33

pepe said...
on Jun. 5 2010 at 2:42 pm
this poem is very good =)

jayjay said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 9:46 am

good job love it keep doin this maybe somethin good will com yo way:)


queen said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 9:41 am
so very true!! Thank you for posting!!!

Rose said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 9:36 am
I love this poem frances and also that poem is soooo true!!!!

bebo said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 9:32 am


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