May 6, 2010
we all live together in one little space. we can write stuff down but we cant erase. we can make lines and draw lots of things. oh the joy it usually brings. each of us draws our own little art. each peice is such an important part. and we can all make our own colored line. for each of us is unipue and no color excactly like mine. so ill keep on drawing and drawing away. for each thing i draw has something to say.

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SKN17 said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 11:02 am

This is well-written, I like the message you convey and the words you have used to convey it. The whole theme of uniqueness is very appealing :)

But do work on the spatial arrangement of the poem as a whole, that would make it more appealing to read; also, check your spelling before you submit, and I am sure you will have tonnes of voters and commenters :)

farmergirl28621 said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 9:21 pm
I do like the meaning of this poem; though sweet sounding-it says a lot.  Stay an individual; stay your color of your crayon.
kms777 replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 3:00 pm
thx u 2 i always like support in writing
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