City Lights

March 28, 2010
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City lights,
They brighten my eyes.
They welcome me into a new city.
Oceans reflecting lights up on me.
Warm breezes blowing in my face.
But soon, the wind stops blowing.
The lights stop reflecting.
Soon, I remember that
this all will soon
end and I will
be gone from
here for...

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SKN17 said...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 2:35 am

I love the unique style of the poem, and the way you have depicted what I think is life and death...

Well done! :)

Zavery_ replied...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 11:13 am
Why thank you! This isn't my usual style of writing so yeah...
sunnyhunny This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 22, 2010 at 3:06 pm
I really like this.  It's cool how it gets bigger and then smaller again!
Zavery_ replied...
May 25, 2010 at 3:53 pm
Thanks Hunny! Yay, you noticed the pattern!!!!!!
AprilDarkness said...
May 21, 2010 at 9:30 pm
Awesome =D
Zavery_ replied...
May 25, 2010 at 3:53 pm
Thanks April!   =)
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