My Secret Place

March 13, 2010
Take me away..
To a secret place
Where I can hide,
And be able to let out what's inside
A place where the skies are blue
And I get to be with you
A place where I'm free,
To be whatever I want to be
A place where the sun shines...
Happily, gleaming with pride
A place where the moon glows,
Softly,swiftly, like a wind blows
A plays where music plays
All through my nights and days
A place where we don't have to fight
To live, and to be alright
A place where sweet love can fill our hearts
And relationships aren't torn apart
A place where we don't have to say
Goodbye..tommorow or today
So let me
So let me fly away,
To Secret Place. :)

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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 4:16 pm

This is really prety and I don't know why but it just puts me at peace as I read it. Really well done, and absolutely beautiful. It kind of reminds me of a song.

Check out my work sometime, please?

DifferentTeen said...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 2:45 pm
I know I said the same thing on your other article but only because we have the same point of view, I'm still waiting for this one to be posted also. Its title is 'Camps Provided Escape' another similar one coming soon is 'A Secret Everything.'
starlight26 replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 6:22 pm
Wow we really do have  SAME points of views! Don't worry i'll check out all of your rticles. I  hope you enjoyed my writing :)
SarahJumps said...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 11:51 pm
this is very pretty. :) check out my stuff
starlight26 replied...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 7:39 pm

Thank You!!!! I will :)

Oh, and if you'd like, I have some other work as is called I looked for a star. I think you'll like it. :D

myworld10 replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 10:15 pm

That is like your best poem!(starlight26)...I really liked it far as "my secret place" it!

starlight26 replied...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 2:02 pm
myworld10 replied...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 2:54 pm

The "daddy's womb" is actually one of my favorite oiems on Teen Ink.

..and you're welcome.

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