Suicide

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Suicide






The moon paints a shadow
Over my lifeless body, as I lie in the corner
The cries of the netherworld touch my skin
And the amnesia of each sin resends
“Arise” they call in the dark corner of the room
My lifeless body floats like
a curse thought the ruins
They bluntly open the window
and the breeze takes over my body like
a decreasing crescendo
They take my right hand and dare me to jump
Quietly opens the door
And the luminous light shines.
Mom asks "are you alright?”
I shut the window and say just fine





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TubaLady This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 11:39 am
That is amazing. It's just so good, I love it!
 
Maxiiswuttheycallme This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 8:23 am

This is really good, I like the way you describe things!

 

 
CowGirl101 said...
May 20, 2010 at 10:47 am
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