Suicide

May 14, 2008
By Taylor Anderson, Mansura, LA

Suicide






The moon paints a shadow
Over my lifeless body, as I lie in the corner
The cries of the netherworld touch my skin
And the amnesia of each sin resends
“Arise” they call in the dark corner of the room
My lifeless body floats like
a curse thought the ruins
They bluntly open the window
and the breeze takes over my body like
a decreasing crescendo
They take my right hand and dare me to jump
Quietly opens the door
And the luminous light shines.
Mom asks "are you alright?”
I shut the window and say just fine


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on Jan. 5 2012 at 11:39 am
TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
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"I know how it feels to be completely alone and helpless, and the last thing you want to hear in that situation is, 'It's going to be OK. ' The only thing that seems to really help is that someone else who has felt that low expressing those feelings"

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Fall for someone that wont break your heart. (i made that up)

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