Comforting

May 10, 2008
By Ariel Maughan, Round Rock, TX

The humor between broken hearts and tattered knees ends in a warm hand's tight squeeze. Something funny resembles something sweet. The contradictions of laughter release to meet pain's defeat.


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Kiana_M BRONZE said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 5:49 pm
Kiana_M BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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... I really, really, really love this one. Wow, it's so simple and yet it has so much meaning to it. I love how you wrote it, it even comforts me, just reading it. It's really clever, it took me a few minutes to understand what it all meant. I really love it, I'm going to look through any other poems you have or write. Keep writing more, PLEASE =) - Kiana (Please rate my latest one?)

on May. 17 2009 at 7:41 pm
KassidyLeigh GOLD, Brewer, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"There are a millions guys who will try to pick you up but only one can sweep you off your feet!" -Emily Illingworth

I loved the way that you didnt have to go on and on to get your point across, your demostration of what I'm asuming to be love is powerfull! 5 stars!!! Check out 11:11 Memories... my break up poem! WOW!!!! Good job :)

on May. 2 2009 at 9:36 pm
oooooooo . . . love it. Love it. Man it's good! Beautiful, beautiful. I'm giving you five stars.

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on May. 1 2009 at 8:29 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Simple, yet completely complex. I loved it.

on Mar. 17 2009 at 5:31 pm
theoobleck GOLD, Auburndale, Florida
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Wow. That's really good.


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