Drummer Boy

February 12, 2010
As the soldiers arched to and fro
After vanquishing many a foe
The drummer rang out rat a tat tat
Then sundenly a Spat

The soldiers turned thier heads
The boy thought he would be dead
He rang out rat a tat tat

So now the boy hangs back and forth
Because he gave all his worth
But unfortunatly that spat
Put him in shame eternally

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Philip_Hart said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 12:27 pm
Good poem, but I can see places of improvement. Your last two lines don't follow your rhyming scheme. If you wanted them to stick out, that's great, but I think you'd be better off following the pattern you've already set up. Good poem beyond that though. Keep up the good work!
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