IF love

February 6, 2010
If love is a gift from God, then why am I not blessed?
If love makes us go right, then why am i wrong?
If love is a story, why am i not a character?
If love is a written poem in a book, why am I not a line in there?
If love starts with two, why am I one?
IF love is the air we breath, then why am I dead?
If love is a dream, them am I going to be awake forever?
IF love is a piece of art, why cant i draw?
If love is the morning light, why do i live in dark?
If love is music, why dont I play anything?
I know love isnt a game, tahts why I'm not a player
Love is romance, and in life thats the top layer
Nothing compared to love is ever enough
A kiss completes love, and its never taugh
Sometimes we love to live, and sometimes we live to love.. Love isnt a secret when its felt it shouldnt be hidden!

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Theboss5-0 said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 12:17 pm
wow! this was great! i love all of the questions... i ut this on my f.b and i got 150 likes!!! love it one of the best ones ever herd<3
Shahed replied...
Dec. 17, 2011 at 12:58 pm

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Please do not copy and publish my poems at where you please for copyrights reasons. Thanks!

Austin Donnel said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 9:08 pm

IF LOVe happens out of no where, then I am in love with this poem!

You have no idea how I actually got to this page, I googled something a picture out of teenink came out,  I clicked on more by this author I clicked on that authors favorites, I got to someones poem I clicked on comments and more and more, till I clicked on you and WOW! I never knew poetry was such an art!

I LOVE this!

Shahed replied...
Dec. 17, 2011 at 1:00 pm

Thank you so much! Poems are pieces of art for those who charish it :)

Thanks again!

BurnHem said...
Nov. 22, 2010 at 4:32 pm
I dont know what else to tell you about your work, I hate to repeat myself but it's so great that I cant think of any other word to use! This is absoultely beautiful such a great poem! I got me wondering and asking myself so many questions .. Truely your work isnt limited to a specific age, it conects to everyone there's who knows about lit... I got on this website to see my son's work and I saw a comment you have posted and it got my attention how you were so poliet in showing how much you like... (more »)
Shahed replied...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 12:08 pm

I just saw this comment, sorry I have missed when I first checked..

Honestly, I cant come up with more ways to thank you for liking my work so much :) I really appricaite that .. and I'll be more than glad if you do so :)

silent_reader said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 11:44 pm
When you really think about it its really true... great poem
Shahed replied...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 2:19 pm
Thank you! :)
CrystalDE said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 4:55 pm
This one gets you thinking. *****
Shahed replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:00 pm
It does, its one of my favorite :) I won a contest with this one :))
CrystalDE replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:08 pm
Awesome! Yep, it does deserve a prize, glad you got one.
Shahed replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:11 pm
Aww thanks! :) I hope you get one for your art work, I used to do ceramics, I did it for 3 years ..
CrystalDE replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:13 pm
Well for one of my picture got in the TeenInk magz. called A Life in Between
Shahed replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:13 pm
I'm sure it's beautiful, Ill check it out right away :)
CrystalDE replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:16 pm
ok Thank you very much, keep up the good work :D
Shahed replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:18 pm

 Aww thanks I'll you too!

Its hard to find it .. Im looking you have so many pages :P

CrystalDE replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:21 pm
lol yeah sorry about that, you could use advance search and look it up by title under my name. Also its near the end of my pics lol
Shahed replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:22 pm
Lol alright .. I'll do that :))
Kbuschan said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 9:00 am


I love your writing style in this poem

5 out of 5 :)

Shahed replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 2:11 pm
Thank you! :))
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