A Hearts Clock

January 22, 2010
I've been counting every hour
That I haven't seen your face
You are now the cause
Of every tear I waste

I hide it with fake laughter
A lie in every smile
Every second I wonder why
It's been such a long while

The weeks go crawling by
I long to hold you close
I'm starving for your love
And withering like a rose

It seems like forever
Yet I guess I'll wait
For I'll always want you
And that shall be my fate

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SamiLynn said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 11:43 pm
I can definitely relate. I moved away from the guy I liked, and this poem reminds me exactly of how i feel
Supernova7 replied...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 9:59 pm
Thanks for the comments and ratings. I totally understand
Supernova7 said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 9:23 pm
Thanks for the comments and ratings everyone you made my day:)
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 10:34 pm
I do love the rhyming scheme captain.and i love the title. and i love the concept. run on sentences-i know. do your dance. i love you captain.
mudpuppy said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 6:49 pm
The burning of heartache and love brilliant!
riley... said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 1:39 pm
maybe my favorite poem by you. a great combination of playful rhyme and deep messages. you have a lot of talent!!! :)
momo12 said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 8:27 pm
wow... im sorta blown away i really like this it has to be my favorite
Supernova7 replied...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 10:57 am
thank you:)
yes_i_am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 7:32 am
hey whr do u get such beautiful ideas?
Supernova7 replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 2:41 pm
My head. . . sometimes when I'm tired ideas for poems or stories pop up and i write them down then fix them in the morning.
mwahxandxmwa said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 6:29 pm

You have rapped in a perfectly worded pakage what so many others feel -including me- you have a way by taking sadness, but not making it depressing you make it a statement.

Another one to be proud of :D

Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 8:37 pm
thank you:)       
PrincessPineapple said...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 8:08 pm
so sad! but really good!
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 6:42 pm
thanx so much:)
FlyWithMe_899 said...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 8:32 pm
aww beautiful!!! it flows wonderfully altogether and its romanticly put!! excellentt:)
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 8:36 pm
Thank you it means alot to me:)
Authorgal98 said...
Jun. 5, 2010 at 1:20 pm
Another lovely, true, engaging poem! My favorite so far!
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 9:41 am
Thank you:)
KosuKovu13 said...
May 31, 2010 at 7:46 pm
Again, a wonderful piece. As I'm sure we all know, at some point in time, our hearts run out of patience and time, don't you agree? I believe figuartively, mine is coming to an end.
Supernova7 replied...
May 31, 2010 at 8:25 pm
Thank you and why is that Kosukovu?
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