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A Hearts Clock

January 22, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


I've been counting every hour
That I haven't seen your face
You are now the cause
Of every tear I waste

I hide it with fake laughter
A lie in every smile
Every second I wonder why
It's been such a long while

The weeks go crawling by
I long to hold you close
I'm starving for your love
And withering like a rose

It seems like forever
Yet I guess I'll wait
For I'll always want you
And that shall be my fate



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on May. 20 2010 at 10:24 pm
DanielleZ DIAMOND, Rochester Hills, Michigan
83 articles 16 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do what you like and like what you do.

Very strong! I like it.

on Apr. 27 2010 at 11:16 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank u:)                        

on Apr. 25 2010 at 12:48 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

Lovely Lovely Lovely

on Apr. 18 2010 at 3:40 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thank you:)

on Apr. 18 2010 at 9:56 am
Heather Manning PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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Awesome I can relate

on Apr. 16 2010 at 6:58 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanx:)                            

hellozina GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 9:53 pm
hellozina GOLD, Boise, Idaho
14 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If everything seems under control, you're just not going fast enough." - Mario Andretti

this is super good :) keep it up!

on Apr. 15 2010 at 11:26 am
salamander254 BRONZE, Branford, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is better to die on your feet than to live on your knees."
-Che Guevara

very solid poem, a longing that few are able to capture with words

on Feb. 7 2010 at 11:59 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thank you it means a lot to me:)

Trolllollo said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 12:08 pm
Trolllollo, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Your welcome...keep up the good work!

Trolllollo said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 10:50 am
Trolllollo, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Your welcome....you're better at writing poetry than me

on Feb. 2 2010 at 6:47 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)

Trolllollo said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 6:24 pm
Trolllollo, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Great poem...it was wonderfully written