January 4, 2010
Life is hard and full of trouble,
If we slip we are sure to tumble,
Yet we dust ourselves off and try again.
We meet new people and make new friends.
Like climbers of mountains,
we strive for the top
afraid to look down at the cliff hanging drop.
Decisions are made and time is spent,
struggling all the way to avoid descent.
We’re all spending a lifetime climbing
With a goal in our head that is well worth reminding.
The goal we strive is the top of our mountain,
where there is peace and a golden fountain.
Where our heart feels no desire,
yet feels the warmth of a blazing fire.
Heaven on earth can be found,
But always remember,
Don’t look down.

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Sandy said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 12:06 pm
This was deep and creative. i loved it.
kellie said...
Feb. 7, 2010 at 9:16 pm
like it mannee:) very nice,very deep.
T-Ho said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 8:50 pm
fresh cuhh.
Austin said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 9:13 pm
Very nice man!!!
runnergirl said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 6:54 am
Your words are so true and very deep. You have such a poignant way to express your feelings. Keep it up!!
moth said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 4:14 pm
You are such an amazing writer! my superkid!
Jessicam said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 8:44 pm
This is very good! i love it!
LaineJackson said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 8:32 pm
its wonderful! i love it. you're an amazing writer and the most wonderful person :)
Bryan said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 8:20 pm
Very nice bruh!
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