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Thoughts are spoken, minds are read
Promises broken, prayers are said
Heaven dances, souls are searched
Admiring glances, tears are lurched

Angel; only in your eyes

Memories spinning, lies are told
Truths discovered, stories unfold
Waiting silenced, dreams come true
Hopes are wished for, fears are new.

Moonlight sparkles enchanting the night
Dew drops capture the essence of light
Each silvery strand, an enemy’s nest
Angel, it’s your eyes, in yours eyes it’s set



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SwordGirl said...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 6:46 pm:
Wow! It's great! You did a great job of keeping the rhythm!
 
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MessOfADreamer said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 12:39 pm:
This was EXTREMELY well-written, I enjoyed reading it very much. I especially liked the line "Dew drops capture the essence of light", it just seemed like pretty strong imagery, and the overall poem was just amazing. :D
 
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LaylaViolet said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 4:02 pm:
I totally loved the rythym (i can never spell it). It felt awesome just reading it. I don't get the idea (i'm a total novice when it comes to poetry) but I still really liked this poem. One of the best of I've seen; I hope it goes in the mag. A+
Oh, and please read my stuff too. I got a few poems, but they're kinda sucky compared to yours. :P
 
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Skeezics said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 2:50 pm:
Wow this is one of the best poems that i have ever read. It is amazing.
 
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