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My Pain

December 15, 2009
By Kibitzer BRONZE, Leland, North Carolina
Kibitzer BRONZE, Leland, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Don't search for an answer , which cannot be givin to you.


Waiting for my soul to take,
her pain away from me,
so I can say.

That you saw the pain,
hidden in my eyes.
As we said our
goodbyes.
I didn't want to let you

GO,SO.

Why don't you look at me?
I'm the same as I use to be.
Then look at yourself?
looking the same way
back when you loved me.


The author's comments:
When I wrote this 11/15/07 I was heartbroken by a guy who I thought was Mr.Right. I wanted him to see me agian for me.

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on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:42 pm
KirstynAlexandra PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
\"I\'m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can\'t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don\'t deserve me at my best.\"
— Marilyn Monroe

Imagination is more important than knowledge...
Albert Einstein

i really like the concept of this poem; it has  a great flow to it. plz read my pieces. i would greatly appreciate it! :)