Light and Love

December 18, 2009
By TheStoryWeaver GOLD, Sofia, Other
TheStoryWeaver GOLD, Sofia, Other
12 articles 4 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Aenied is an Odyssey of epic proportions." - Caleb
"Eve was deceived and ate the fruit, Adam ate it out of stupidity." - Mr. M
"Begone ye map of woe!"
"I'm the map..." - Lydia and Caleb.


When he opened the door he found something so amazing,
Yet so simple. He found something so beautiful,
Yet so sad. He found something so ordinary, that in its
Normality, it became
Abnormal. He saw light and
On that light was love.
And when he saw that love, he broke
Off a piece and shared it with everyone he met. And
Everyone who touched it,
Who believed it, shined like sun-
Beams dancing across the sky.
Then, those people shared their love with
Someone else until eventually, the world was
Overtaken with light and everyone
Could love. Although the light
Was bright and it
Was too much to bear for one
Person, being too bright, when covering
The earth, it shined pleasantly
And was pleasing to the
Eye and
Soul.


The author's comments:
It started with a game and turned into a poem.

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on Jun. 1 2010 at 2:40 pm
TheStoryWeaver GOLD, Sofia, Other
12 articles 4 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Aenied is an Odyssey of epic proportions." - Caleb
"Eve was deceived and ate the fruit, Adam ate it out of stupidity." - Mr. M
"Begone ye map of woe!"
"I'm the map..." - Lydia and Caleb.

this is going to sound strange but, i don't really know what it's about either because it's open to interpretation. the way i see it is the way "darkness" has overtaken the world, yet one person can make a change and turn it into something beautiful. make sense?

Fayrouz SILVER said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 11:08 am
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
9 articles 12 photos 364 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

alright, i'm not a liar so i'll tell you that even though i loved it and just felt enchanted by it, i have little or no idea what it is about. i feel like i can relate to it...as if something in me goes "oh yeah!" but my brain is kind of confused....either way, i like how it ended with soul. sometimes, it feels like souls communicate more than logic and brain...

on Feb. 10 2010 at 2:07 pm
Very good Sofia Beautiful, and nicely done. Seems you have a good talent. Keep it up.


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