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Make Sure to Leave the Window Open MAG

December 31, 2009
By Amber Acuna BRONZE, La Junta, Colorado
Amber Acuna BRONZE, La Junta, Colorado
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Be careful to never close
The only way to
Let the birds
Come in

By nature
We close things.
Because maybe
It helps us to feel better?

You never know
When you will
Be visited
By your own raven.

Why close anything?
Leave everything
Open
Especially

Your eyes


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InkWriter13 said...
on Jun. 14 2012 at 9:34 pm
Astoundingly insightful and true! SO TRUE! I love your parallels and tie-ins with nature (birds, raven). The symbolism of the raven was a good touch as well. A truly wonderful message to humankind. Great work. :D Would you please read and comment on my poem titled Amidst Blinding Chaos? I would really appreciate it! :D

on Dec. 31 2009 at 7:26 pm
NorthernWriter, Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

This was lovely and you are too! I appreciate your tolerance and open-mindedness which is clearly evidenet in your poem. The last line made me smile and it lit a bulb in me! Good job!