My Only Wish

December 9, 2009
I wish I saw that falling star,
and grant my wish upon it's fall
that i shall be the world's next queen
and wish this idea was not obscene.

The moon's best light shines on my face,
and it reveals the hidden case
the one that holds the hidden thing
and tells me wether i shall have my king.

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Rennie said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 12:41 pm
So cool! I love how you expressed yourself!
adristar96 said...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 2:15 pm
I like it. :)
DallysGrrl said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 7:04 pm
i really enjoyed this poem!!!! its smart and charming. and its not 2 rambly. sometimes a small poem lik this is all u need!! its good that you could put so much into so little space.
alicecullen replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 7:07 pm
thanks! :)
DallysGrrl replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 7:16 pm
No problem. its really great!! i hope that u keep writing!!
little-miss-sunshine said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 4:45 pm
Great poem. I love how it makes you think, and when you do, you can relate to it in so many ways!
Emily:) said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 12:47 pm
This is definitely amazing. Congratulations on your talent- and yes, I totally relate.
alicecullen replied...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 7:24 pm
thanks. i am so happy right now i could scream! (but id get grounded) so thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU!
Ash_K said...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 3:24 pm
I absolutely love this poem!
This is such a fantastic poem!!! I can totally relate to it, but i can also, as a writer myself, create different meanings from what you have written. you know, like i can translate it in different ways. i loved it!
alicecullen replied...
Jan. 5, 2010 at 7:47 pm
thanks! thank you for the feedback!
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