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My Only Wish

December 9, 2009
By Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe


I wish I saw that falling star,
and grant my wish upon it's fall
that i shall be the world's next queen
and wish this idea was not obscene.

The moon's best light shines on my face,
and it reveals the hidden case
the one that holds the hidden thing
and tells me wether i shall have my king.


The author's comments:
i wrote this poem from my heart and i have special relationship with it. i wrote it from personal experiences and hope people could relate to it too.

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Rennie BRONZE said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 12:41 pm
Rennie BRONZE, Abbeville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
You only have one life, so don't mess it up.








-Logan (My little brother)

So cool! I love how you expressed yourself!

on Feb. 20 2010 at 2:15 pm
adristar96 SILVER, Miami, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolate, You'll never know what your gonna get. :) Forest Gump

I like it. :)

on Feb. 10 2010 at 7:16 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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No problem. its really great!! i hope that u keep writing!!

on Feb. 10 2010 at 7:07 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

thanks! :)

on Feb. 10 2010 at 7:04 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 199 comments
i really enjoyed this poem!!!! its smart and charming. and its not 2 rambly. sometimes a small poem lik this is all u need!! its good that you could put so much into so little space.

on Jan. 24 2010 at 4:45 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Great poem. I love how it makes you think, and when you do, you can relate to it in so many ways!

on Jan. 10 2010 at 7:24 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

thanks. i am so happy right now i could scream! (but id get grounded) so thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU!

Emily:) said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 12:47 pm
This is definitely amazing. Congratulations on your talent- and yes, I totally relate.

on Jan. 5 2010 at 7:47 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

thanks! thank you for the feedback!

on Jan. 4 2010 at 3:24 pm
blanking_out GOLD, Bonita Springs, Florida
13 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Follow the leader, but not too close, just in case they fall.

I absolutely love this poem!

This is such a fantastic poem!!! I can totally relate to it, but i can also, as a writer myself, create different meanings from what you have written. you know, like i can translate it in different ways. i loved it!