November 27, 2009
A midnight black sheet,
That covers the town for dreams,
Strewn with white sequence.
Night is a wonderful thing.

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laurathewise said...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 9:48 pm
delete the comma from the end of the first line and it's practically perfect. :)
Brandy_Lil_Mama said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 9:28 pm
I like this. Its short poem that gets straight to the point and its really deep.
Angel*music*lover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 10:18 am
I really, EXTREMELY,LOVE THIS!!!!!!!
nicolekelliher133 said...
Jan. 1, 2010 at 10:04 pm
Nice Imagery
PurpleCoat replied...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 4:03 pm
Great work! It's short and sweet and very true. Beautiful. :)
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