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Night

A midnight black sheet,
That covers the town for dreams,
Strewn with white sequence.
Night is a wonderful thing.




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laurathewise said...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 9:48 pm:
delete the comma from the end of the first line and it's practically perfect. :)
 
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Brandy_Lil_Mama said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 9:28 pm:
I like this. Its short poem that gets straight to the point and its really deep.
 
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Angel*music*lover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 10:18 am:
I really, EXTREMELY,LOVE THIS!!!!!!!
angel
 
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nicolekelliher133 said...
Jan. 1, 2010 at 10:04 pm:
Nice Imagery
 
PurpleCoat replied...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 4:03 pm :
Great work! It's short and sweet and very true. Beautiful. :)
 
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