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By Jennifer O., Westwood, MA
He remembers the castles she built in the sand,
How they'd go for an ice cream, him holding her hand.
He remembers the times past her bedtime,
The glasses of water, the nursery rhymes.
He remembers the puppy she wanted so much,
All the peanut butter sandwiches she wanted for lunch.
He remembers her chubby face shining with happiness,
As she tried on her mothers's wedding dress.
He remembers her yesterday,
Dressed in that same dress, her face aglow.
He remembers how he gave her away,
And realizes he must let go.
This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.
Jessicka
~blackrose~aww so cute... very nice work, i like how it has a flow with life
very sweet...very deep...i like it anot...it touches certain spot of my life...this is beautiful!
PnO4ever said...
Jun. 26 at 8:24 pm:
Jun. 26 at 8:24 pm:
this is really touching...touches certain areas of my life!...this is beautiful!
lovehate29This is really beautiful. It is so touching. Great job!
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Tamara*Montawow if my dad were still alive im sure he would feel the same way!!!! great job i love it
It is brilliant. It flows. I am crying. i LOVE IT SO MUCH... THANKYOU FOR WRITING IT...
writer011sad but not sad ssd like crying sad but aww thats soo sweet sad u no i luved it he her
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kristinleigh123 said...
Jan. 9 at 1:37 am:
Jan. 9 at 1:37 am:
This is really good. It makes me realize how my dad feels! Keep up the good work!!!
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