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Letting Go Magazine

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He remembers the castles she built in the sand,

How they'd go for an ice cream, him holding her hand.

He remembers the times past her bedtime,

The glasses of water, the nursery rhymes.

He remembers the puppy she wanted so much,

All the peanut butter sandwiches she wanted for lunch.

He remembers her chubby face shining with happiness,

As she tried on her mothers's wedding dress.

He remembers her yesterday,

Dressed in that same dress, her face aglow.

He remembers how he gave her away,

And realizes he must let go.




Magazine This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Jessicka said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 12:19 am:

beautiful =)

 
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~blackrose~VIP said...
Jun. 29, 2009 at 5:05 pm:

aww so cute... very nice work, i like how it has a flow with life

 
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ong V. said...
Jun. 26, 2009 at 8:33 pm:

very sweet...very deep...i like it anot...it touches certain spot of my life...this is beautiful!

 
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PnO4ever said...
Jun. 26, 2009 at 8:24 pm:

this is really touching...touches certain areas of my life!...this is beautiful!

 
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lovehate29VIP said...
Jun. 16, 2009 at 12:12 am:

This is really beautiful. It is so touching. Great job!

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Tamara*Monta said...
May 23, 2009 at 3:41 pm:

wow if my dad were still alive im sure he would feel the same way!!!! great job i love it

 
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Jackie K. said...
May 21, 2009 at 2:56 pm:

Its beautyful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
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Twilightnme said...
May 14, 2009 at 12:00 am:

It is brilliant. It flows. I am crying. i LOVE IT SO MUCH... THANKYOU FOR WRITING IT...

 
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writer011 said...
May 9, 2009 at 1:49 am:

awww I love this great job!

 
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Babybluelove1 said...
Apr. 10, 2009 at 12:50 am:

sad but not sad ssd like crying sad but aww thats soo sweet sad u no i luved it he her

 
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Shannon_McCauley said...
Mar. 9, 2009 at 2:31 pm:

Great job!

 
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kristinleigh123 said...
Jan. 9, 2009 at 1:37 am:

This is really good. It makes me realize how my dad feels! Keep up the good work!!!

 
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