Letting Go MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

   



He remembers the castles she built in the sand,

How they'd go for an ice cream, him holding her hand.

He remembers the times past her bedtime,

The glasses of water, the nursery rhymes.

He remembers the puppy she wanted so much,

All the peanut butter sandwiches she wanted for lunch.

He remembers her chubby face shining with happiness,

As she tried on her mothers's wedding dress.

He remembers her yesterday,

Dressed in that same dress, her face aglow.

He remembers how he gave her away,

And realizes he must let go.





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on Aug. 19 2009 at 12:19 am
Jessicka BRONZE, Bradenton, Florida
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beautiful =)

on Jun. 29 2009 at 5:05 pm
Vindictive_Love BRONZE, Abq, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Talent wins games, but teamwork and intelligence wins championships.
Michael Jordan

Whatever you do in life, will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it.
Mahatma Ghandi

aww so cute... very nice work, i like how it has a flow with life

on Jun. 26 2009 at 8:33 pm
BaBii_GhErL PLATINUM, Wasilla, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Loving someone who doesnt love u is not wrong its just painful!

very sweet...very deep...i like it anot...it touches certain spot of my life...this is beautiful!

PnO4ever said...
on Jun. 26 2009 at 8:24 pm
this is really touching...touches certain areas of my life!...this is beautiful!

on Jun. 16 2009 at 12:12 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is really beautiful. It is so touching. Great job!



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on May. 23 2009 at 3:41 pm
Tamara*Monta BRONZE, Warren, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
never regret sompthing that once made u smile

wow if my dad were still alive im sure he would feel the same way!!!! great job i love it

on May. 21 2009 at 2:56 pm
hurting_real_bad SILVER, Conneaut, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
“Yes I love him. I love him more than anything else in this world and there is nothing that I would like better than to hold on to him forever. But I know it's not for the best. So no matter how much my heart is going to break, I've got to let him go so he can know just how much I love him. Maybe if I'm lucky, he'll come back, but if not, I can make it through this.”

Its beautyful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on May. 14 2009 at 12:00 am
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"You dont know what you have until its gone"

It is brilliant. It flows. I am crying. i LOVE IT SO MUCH... THANKYOU FOR WRITING IT...

on May. 9 2009 at 1:49 am
writer011 SILVER, B-more, Maryland
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awww I love this great job!

on Apr. 10 2009 at 12:50 am
Babybluelove1 SILVER, Clyde, Texas
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sad but not sad ssd like crying sad but aww thats soo sweet sad u no i luved it he her

Shannon_ GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2009 at 2:31 pm
Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
For we are the children of The Lost Generation and Truth is blind.

Great job!

on Jan. 9 2009 at 1:37 am
This is really good. It makes me realize how my dad feels! Keep up the good work!!!


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