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We've been friends now,

for quite a while.

Through ups and downs,

tears and smiles.

All those letters ending,

best friends forever.

All those ideas,

some crazy, some clever.

We shared the bad times,

and the happiness,

We know our friendship,

would be nothing less.

The times we spent together,

I'll always keep in my heart.

We know these memories,

would last from the start.

Talking for hours on the phone,

you always had good advice to loan.

So I dedicate this poem to you,

because you're a friend who has stayed true!




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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JennalynnThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 10:57 pm:
I think this was a pretty decent poem, yes, it wasn't deep and powerful, but poetry is whatever the author wishes it to be. It was simple, not spectacular, but still had some good ideas. I think with more editing and focus it could be even better. Keep writing :)
 
lizerina776This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 7:04 pm :
i totally agree :)
 
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Moee1 said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 1:26 pm:
This is soo beautiful :)
 
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SilverSunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 9:49 am:
I liked this especialy because the way I thought it was leading to one thing, and ended up somewhere else! Cograts on the publication! Nice Work!
 
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SilverSunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 9:49 am:
I liked this especialy because the way I thought it was leading to one thing, and ended up somewhere else! Cograts on the publication! Nice Work!
 
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rock ganxta said...
Mar. 23, 2012 at 2:56 am:

i  lyk tha page

 

 
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lovemenot said...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 8:54 pm:

Why does everyone need to be so negative? Shouldnt we be supportive of those who get published?

Your poem was great, keep writing!

 
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MarleyRainbow said...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 2:56 pm:

it was okay i guess not that bad but keep writting

 

 
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garthgirl8888This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 8, 2012 at 8:30 pm:
good, but nothing spectacular...
 
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kelly said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 8:12 pm:
this poem made me think that my friendship would last from the start and i would love my best friend WealthyLoving.COMit's a right place for you. Online dating in the developed countries for the millionaire singles and admirers.
 
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JuneTazThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 4:16 pm:
^^What she said
 
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BlueLillyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 8:39 am:
I honestly don't see how this was voted top piece of the day it just seems bland and without that much emotion. Still your good, keep writing:D
 
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DarkLonelyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 9:21 pm:
love it it was amazing
 
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Nick-M said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 7:54 pm:
Really nice! I know this feeling... My poem 'I am the Garden' is a new type of poem I don't usually write-- because I'm in love! Feedback would be... spectacular!
 
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Cammie42 said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 12:13 pm:
Haha awh, this was so sweet and innocent, I enjoyed it a lot. This made me wanna run to my best friend's house and give her a maaaajor hug!:D Check out my poem Dirty Luck if you have free time.(: Thanks! And keep writing!
 
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foreverloveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 1:12 pm:
thats really good and clever! :)
 
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Torri_123 said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 2:43 pm:
So sweet...I really like this poem
 
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sarawho382 said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 11:33 pm:
so cute :) i like it a lot
 
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raindance72This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 4:49 pm:

To be honest, I'm not sure how this was voted the top piece of today. It really wasn't "powerful" to me....that's just my opinion. Also I think that exclamation mark is a little much, but overall this poem is good. Keep writing, you have big potential!

By the way - would anyone consider taking a look at my work? Right now I have two poems in. I really need feedback to improve my writing :) Thanks!

 
chocolateheartz replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:35 pm :
lol, exactly what i had in mind. was expecting something more impressive... but it was a nice simple poem that lots of people can relate to =)
 
foreverloveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 1:14 pm :
I agree its really sweet just needs more "KUZHAM!" haha :)
 
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