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We've been friends now,

for quite a while.

Through ups and downs,

tears and smiles.

All those letters ending,

best friends forever.

All those ideas,

some crazy, some clever.

We shared the bad times,

and the happiness,

We know our friendship,

would be nothing less.

The times we spent together,

I'll always keep in my heart.

We know these memories,

would last from the start.

Talking for hours on the phone,

you always had good advice to loan.

So I dedicate this poem to you,

because you're a friend who has stayed true!




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Hayley F. said...
May 22, 2012 at 7:54 am:
I liked the rhythm of the poem and the stanza's were really creative.
 
miky 123 replied...
Jul. 5, 2012 at 6:23 am :
i very much like it ...........oh love it
 
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Perfect-Darkness said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 5:23 pm:

I think it was amazing, even with the simple words, to me it seems pretty powerful :P I loved it, it made me think of my best friend...now I miss her

 

 
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Maryberry28mt said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 4:18 pm:
It was okay. Little too simple for my taste. Needs more descriptive words. 
 
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Ivyalyn said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 1:50 pm:
I really liked how you used Rhythm in your poem. It really added to the effect. I also liked how you made kind of like a limerick with your rhythming patterns. Great job(:
 
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sydzue said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 8:06 am:
Your poem was good; it had a rhythm that flowed very smoothly, and was easy to read. Your figuritive language expressed your thoughts really nicely and it was very good.
 
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Lauren T. said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 8:01 am:
I thought this piece of poetry was deep gave a little but of a heart warming feeling to me. In your poetry I found scansion, and found a rhythm to your poem. On the ending words of a verse, I also found assonance with long sounds that were the same.
 
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decievinghimesama said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 7:54 am:
like it ♥ now I miss my best friend all the more
 
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Jennalynn said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 10:57 pm:
I think this was a pretty decent poem, yes, it wasn't deep and powerful, but poetry is whatever the author wishes it to be. It was simple, not spectacular, but still had some good ideas. I think with more editing and focus it could be even better. Keep writing :)
 
lizerina776 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 7:04 pm :
i totally agree :)
 
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Moee1 said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 1:26 pm:
This is soo beautiful :)
 
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SilverSunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 9:49 am:
I liked this especialy because the way I thought it was leading to one thing, and ended up somewhere else! Cograts on the publication! Nice Work!
 
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SilverSunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 9:49 am:
I liked this especialy because the way I thought it was leading to one thing, and ended up somewhere else! Cograts on the publication! Nice Work!
 
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rock ganxta said...
Mar. 23, 2012 at 2:56 am:

i  lyk tha page

 

 
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lovemenot said...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 8:54 pm:

Why does everyone need to be so negative? Shouldnt we be supportive of those who get published?

Your poem was great, keep writing!

 
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MarleyRainbow said...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 2:56 pm:

it was okay i guess not that bad but keep writting

 

 
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garthgirl8888 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 8, 2012 at 8:30 pm:
good, but nothing spectacular...
 
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kelly said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 8:12 pm:
this poem made me think that my friendship would last from the start and i would love my best friend WealthyLoving.COMit's a right place for you. Online dating in the developed countries for the millionaire singles and admirers.
 
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JuneTaz said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 4:16 pm:
^^What she said
 
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BlueLilly said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 8:39 am:
I honestly don't see how this was voted top piece of the day it just seems bland and without that much emotion. Still your good, keep writing:D
 
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DarkLonelyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 9:21 pm:
love it it was amazing
 
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