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The Victim MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown


Water trickling in the stream,

Slowly covering up her scream.

The birds are singing a melody,

Pretending all is in harmony.

Flowers grow around her grave

She is forever nature's slave

Her memorial service is performed by the earth

By the wind and the sky

That's all the good-bye

she'll receive.

None will miss her for that long,

Or none will know that she is gone.

None will care about the victim,

Who died in the woods near the stream.

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on Oct. 26 2010 at 7:00 pm
hannahgirl22 BRONZE, Fryeburg Maine, Maine
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pretty good very nice job

on Oct. 26 2010 at 6:16 pm
MusicGirl101 BRONZE, Allison Park, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"If you feel as if you hit a wall and you aren't strong enough to break it down...take every little step to climb all the way to the top."

this is so beautifully written :)

Marc101 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 3:15 pm
Marc101 BRONZE, Los Lunas, New Mexico
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Wow Very good.

on Apr. 10 2009 at 2:06 am
YeseniaG SILVER, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Life is what happens when you're busy making plans.

Such a great concept. Beautifully done.

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