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My Room MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

   My room, my room, what a mess.

I need to clean it, I must confess.

I cannot see the floor any more.

And if it's not clean, I'm out the door.

Cleaning this, what a bore.

Under my dresser I see a dust bunny.

As you may see, it's just not funny.

I hate this room, it'll never be clean.

Junk knee-high, if you know what I mean.

Clothes and books tossed throughout.

I don't think I'll ever get out!

Ooh! Look at this and look at that.

"Hey, Ma, I found the cat!"

My dirty socks really do smell,

Among tubes and tubes of goopy hair gel.

Under my bed, I see a dozen things.

A book, a pen, fried chicken wings!!

Cleaning my room; what a bore.

I can't take it anymore!!

My cat, what hasn't been seen for a week.

These fuzzy cookies really do reek.

My sport's collage on my wall,

Jose, Boomer, Bo know football.

As you may see, I'm almost through.

I'd better go or I'll lose this, too.

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This article has 7 comments.

This is so true. Your great at writing. :)

Khushi said...
on Nov. 11 2017 at 2:18 am
This is a very good

keilitalove said...
on Apr. 28 2011 at 7:45 pm
wow i really like ur poem because it seems that u are talking about mine! (:

on Jan. 8 2011 at 8:45 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

You really have the writers touch. Tell me... is it very nauty of me to ask? Is your room really that messy? I mean... it sounds so intresting.

on Sep. 15 2010 at 10:11 am
Cathys26 BRONZE, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
" a diamond is not just crystal in form it is a very little precious piece of beauty put together just like ones friendship'

Out of the 15 pages me and my friend have been passing this is ACTUALLY one of the best poems !

enjoyed.. and really funny :)

well done

:) xxxxxx

dfvvvv said...
on May. 31 2010 at 2:07 am

cool i love da pomes!!!

:) :) :)

on Mar. 27 2010 at 4:08 pm
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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cute! I loved it :)

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