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The sky is sunny,

Runners are runny,

Jokes are punny.

The world is in order today.



The pines are pining,

Meter maids are fining,

Light bulbs are shining.

I think this morning will

be OK!


This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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ThermadorianGrey said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 7:32 pm
I like the simpleness and the lightness of this peace.  Not sure why you went for the German as opposed to the English for the title.  Also kinda turned off by the over the top enthusiasm on the "OK!"  Otherwise, I think it's generally a pretty pleasant, inoffensive piece.
 
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