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Empty, hollow black and white,
this is how I live my life,
everyday beginning and ending,
with hollow sounds my soul is groaning.

With laughter and jokes they occupy,
but nothing heals the brokeness inside,
so when they're not looking, I start to cry and say,
"Today is just one of those days."

But God can make me beautiful inside,
heal all the cirruption that cries,
out to him in times of need,
my God is a loving God indeed.



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MelodyofAthena said...
Dec. 30, 2009 at 8:27 pm
Wow deep. This is beautiful and it's good to see another Aussie on the site 5/5.
Keep up the work, Mel:) ;)
 
Catholicgirl_101 said...
Dec. 13, 2009 at 11:27 pm
aw bones thank you. I love influencing people, but in a good way. :)
thanks
 
Bones said...
Dec. 2, 2009 at 1:41 pm
wow you are what people should look for in their lives
 
catholicgirl_101 said...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 5:33 pm
thank you so much, aiden! :)
 
catholicgirl_101 said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 5:06 pm
thanks sarah!
look, if you could tell siz_tooth_sun and the rest; i wont be on the forum again. ;) I've accidentally changed my email address that registered with- and cant remember it. And you have to use your email to log in with. So, tell everyone thanks for making me welcome. If you wouldn't mind, plz say it in the "I really need help..." thread.
Thanks so much, sarah!! :-*
 
sarahbellum87 said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 7:49 pm
this is really beautiful and the message is 110% true!
good job =)
 
PoetAiden replied...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 7:50 am
good job, if you were shotting for creativety you got it :) 5/5 keep up your writing.
 
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