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My heart is beating,
Yet frozen and dead within me.
My eyes are open
Yet they are distantly dreaming.

I walk class to class,
But only because I have to.
I smile and I laugh
Because that’s something a happy girl would do.

I go to sleep
And I wake the next day.
Just to find out with bitter disappointment
That nothing has really changed.

I know my life is amazing
I know I am very blessed.
But there’s an empty part screaming
Over something I haven’t found yet.

I love my life.
I love earth down to the core.
But on the surface of my soul,
I can’t help but wonder if there’s something more.

Call me greedy,
But I know that I’m not the only one
With a part of them missing.



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Fredwardness said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 8:03 pm
i likes heart...told you
 
imaginize(writician) replied...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 8:37 am
We like your writing. i know i do
 
Sarah W. said...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 7:09 pm
Don't worry. My BF i told you about? yeah? well he and his fam are over in england on a va-cay (won it!!) and his sister has the swine so they can't come back until shes better. the one person i can confide in, trust absolutely, gone for a few weeks.
 
TheWrittenHeart replied...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 11:40 pm
Okay, please forgive me for saying this right now but...you told me about your boyfriend? I dont recall. I am so sorry. maybe you could refresh my memory?
 
writerscramp replied...
Nov. 1, 2009 at 2:40 pm
sorry, its writerscramp! teenink was being funky. i started a new thread, Helping Hand, for anyone that needs advice. i still love all your work!
 
TheWrittenHeart replied...
Nov. 1, 2009 at 6:12 pm
:) Really? Thats a cool thread. I'll check it out! I hope your sister gets better soon. And since the only person you can trust and confide is gone for a while, you could always talk to me; I will listen. Oh and thanks for liking my work.
 
Jatavion replied...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 10:07 pm
hey heart. great job once again :)
 
TheWrittenHeart replied...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 10:15 pm
good job once AGAIN? have you read my other work?
 
Jatavion replied...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 10:25 pm
haha, sure have :)
 
Hello(happyface) replied...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 9:11 pm
This poem is very very true to me :)
 
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