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i should have known I let you down
you were a mess
and I was never around
i lost the essence of time
i forgot you were hurting
and i was too blind
i didn't realize what you needed me to do
or maybe i just wasn't prepared to give myself to you
i guess i was not as good as you thought
& i guess you don't see what you have until you notice what you got
but I'll leave you my heart
cause that was meant for you to keep
i apologize for bittersweet love
for leaving it bent
forever to bleed.





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Henny said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 2:28 pm
thanks you guys ! more coming soon so look out for updates
 
rebeldiamond1313kd said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 8:18 am
this is great. i understand the feeling in this...
 
MeghanMichelle said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 9:23 pm
Amazing poem.
 
Jazzzy517 said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 3:12 pm
this is AWSOME!!! i wish i could write dat good....
 
lalax3 said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 2:23 pm
this is really good, keep writing :)
 
heaven said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 12:44 pm
wow!!!
very good!!
love it keep writing!!(:
 
tgir85 said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 5:36 pm
very nice. kudos! keep it up!! ^^
 
RhyanWoods said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 9:41 pm
All I can say is wow. I love it. It reminds me of my ex. Keep it up.
 
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