He Broke My Heart

September 28, 2009
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Does he know because of him I felt dead
Did he taste all of the tears I had shed
Did he see me fall
Did he watch me lose it all
Did he hear me pleading
Did he hear my heart slowly stop beating

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KonyaB!!! This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 8:07 pm
Woah...deep. REALLY GOOD!!! You brought out all the emotion in it too....really great job!!! If you get a chance, check out my work too! :)
karakelso said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 10:55 pm
This is awesome
shakedra<3 said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 3:34 pm
this is a really good poem...dont stop writting
kennedy_rowzz replied...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 3:44 pm
Thank you soooo much.And I plan to keep writing for a while.Also if you liked this poem I have a few others, you should check them out.:)
livelovewrite98 replied...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 3:14 pm
Omg this is sooooo good!
kennedy_rowzz replied...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 10:42 am
Thanx for all the feedback!!!!!!
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