He Broke My Heart

September 28, 2009
By kennedy_rowzz SILVER, Sterling Heights, Michigan
kennedy_rowzz SILVER, Sterling Heights, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"we can never truly know who we are"-afi


Does he know because of him I felt dead
Did he taste all of the tears I had shed
Did he see me fall
Did he watch me lose it all
Did he hear me pleading
Did he hear my heart slowly stop beating


The author's comments:
I wrote this thinking about guys who hurt girls terribly and then don't even feel bad about what they've done its as if they don't even notice a thing.

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KonyaB!!! GOLD said...
on Oct. 18 2009 at 8:07 pm
KonyaB!!! GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
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Woah...deep. REALLY GOOD!!! You brought out all the emotion in it too....really great job!!! If you get a chance, check out my work too! :)

on Oct. 11 2009 at 10:42 am
kennedy_rowzz SILVER, Sterling Heights, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we can never truly know who we are"-afi

Thanx for all the feedback!!!!!!

on Oct. 10 2009 at 3:14 pm
livelovewrite98 BRONZE, Sterling Heights, Michigan
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Omg this is sooooo good!

on Oct. 8 2009 at 10:55 pm
karakelso BRONZE, Bonita, California
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This is awesome

on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:44 pm
kennedy_rowzz SILVER, Sterling Heights, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we can never truly know who we are"-afi

Thank you soooo much.And I plan to keep writing for a while.Also if you liked this poem I have a few others, you should check them out.:)

<3

on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:34 pm
shakedra<3 SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
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this is a really good poem...dont stop writting


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