Through My Eyes

September 9, 2009
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As I grow in this world I have realized that the beauty of nature and the earth are disguised, disguised by evil the thing I despise.
This is a horrible world at least through my eyes. It was not made horrible and they are good guys but
the clouds are darkening from the pollution rising to the skies
we live in a world that is doomed for destruction
the world was once made pure but had an evil abduction
I often say why and begin to cry
as I watch the world suffer through my eyes.

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Corey C. said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 9:57 am
well done. Keep up the good work
AlexisMunroe said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 11:12 pm
Well done! I hope that you continue writing.
Nigeria said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 11:10 pm
It is unbelievable that such deep words were written by a teenager. His family should be very proud.
oneekabotu said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 11:06 pm
WOW! What amazing insight and compassion from a "teen". It is so sad that it is the actions of adults (who should know better) that caused such raw emotions to be felt by one so young.
Corey C. said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 6:54 pm
This poem really touched me. The authors words are so true
Corey C. said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 6:12 pm
I enjoyed reading this poem. Slowly we are destroying our world. We all need to do something before it's too late. Very strong words by the author
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