Beyond The Eye

August 25, 2009
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Believe only what they can see

But there is more

Then meets the human eye

Things People can never imagine

Places beyond anyone's imagination

Beyond the eye

Things the eye can't reach



Things so unbelievable

Too much to comprehend

There are something's meant to
be mysteries...

And stay mysteries

Mysteries with no answers

Stay unseen

Beyond the eye

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Hope_Princess said...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 8:51 am
Despite what Kewl Critic said, I like the spacing. It makes you want to scroll down and read more and more.
This poem (from my point of view) has perfect flow. It all swept together like a wave in the sea.
You're getting better and better at this!
Keep writing!
RLJoy replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 8:57 am
thank you so much
Kewl Critic said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 12:46 pm
really good, but the spacing is super confusing. maybe fix that and its perfect
RLJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 3:26 pm
thanks for the advice!
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