Beyond The Eye

August 25, 2009
By RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments

People
Believe only what they can see








But there is more








Then meets the human eye















Things People can never imagine





Places beyond anyone's imagination








Beyond the eye








Things the eye can't reach










Or









Understand









Things so unbelievable







Too much to comprehend













There are something's meant to
be mysteries...









And stay mysteries








Mysteries with no answers








Stay unseen







Beyond the eye


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RLJoy said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:57 am
thank you so much

on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:51 am
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 377 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Despite what Kewl Critic said, I like the spacing. It makes you want to scroll down and read more and more.

This poem (from my point of view) has perfect flow. It all swept together like a wave in the sea.

You're getting better and better at this!

Keep writing!

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:26 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
thanks for the advice!

Kewl Critic said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 12:46 pm
really good, but the spacing is super confusing. maybe fix that and its perfect




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