Beyond The Eye

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People
Believe only what they can see








But there is more








Then meets the human eye















Things People can never imagine





Places beyond anyone's imagination








Beyond the eye








Things the eye can't reach










Or









Understand









Things so unbelievable







Too much to comprehend













There are something's meant to
be mysteries...









And stay mysteries








Mysteries with no answers








Stay unseen







Beyond the eye





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Hope_Princess said...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 8:51 am
Despite what Kewl Critic said, I like the spacing. It makes you want to scroll down and read more and more.
This poem (from my point of view) has perfect flow. It all swept together like a wave in the sea.
You're getting better and better at this!
Keep writing!
 
RLJoy replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 8:57 am
thank you so much
 
Kewl Critic said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 12:46 pm
really good, but the spacing is super confusing. maybe fix that and its perfect
 
RLJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 3:26 pm
thanks for the advice!
 
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