Winter In Wisconsin

August 30, 2009
By writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm


Its Winter in Wisconsin
and the gentle breezes blow
at 70 mph
at 35 below

oh how i love wisconsin
with the snow up to your butt
you take a breath of winter air
and you're nose' frozen shut

yes, the weather here is beautiful
as another snowstorm causes a blackout in town,
so i guess i'll hang around,
i could never leave wisconsin,
IM FROZEN TO THE FRICKIN GROUND

The author's comments:
hahaha and what is all this i hear about global whinning i mean warming?

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on Sep. 28 2010 at 11:39 am
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

Haha Thanks

on Mar. 1 2010 at 9:21 pm
shockerrrx BRONZE, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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I'm from WI as well. You've basically summed it up. Well done. :)

Heart SILVER said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 11:02 am
Heart SILVER, Arcadia, California
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Ha I was smiling while I was reading this. Its funny!!! Great job once again.

on Sep. 29 2009 at 7:01 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
33 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

Thanks! i know that. but practice makes perfect

Fangz PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 28 2009 at 10:28 pm
Fangz PLATINUM, Ware, Massachusetts
37 articles 15 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
In necessariis unitas, in dubiis libertas, in omnibus caritas.

hehe, i like it. you don't see much humor in writing anymore. thanks for your comment on mine. I've read most of what you've got on here, and though i empathize with the messages in them, they're not very good. Sorry, just trying to be constructive. Its obvious that you like writing and you have potential for it, so i would suggest brushing up on the fundamentals of creative writing and then maybe trying to write in form, like villanelle or sonnet, before you try tackling free verse again. Just my opinion.




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