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As the days pass by
memories combine
creating a smile
fit for a king

The old days seem too at ease
with the smell of success,
in the breeze
leaving subdued thoughts
on the trail
leading to the perfect life



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LoVeWrItInG said...
Aug. 26, 2009 at 4:09 pm:
Your welcome. Thanks for commenting on mine. I am trying to get as many comments as possible because this is the first article I'v submitted.
 
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Ian_S. said...
Aug. 26, 2009 at 1:21 am:
Its okay that the title is wrong. The poem is short and sweet. I like it. Thanks for commenting on my piece... It means a lot to me
 
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LoVeWrItInG said...
Aug. 25, 2009 at 8:59 pm:
Sorry about the title. I put the wrong one in, and don't know how to change it.
 
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