A man

August 16, 2009
By LoVeWrItInG BRONZE, San Francisco, California
LoVeWrItInG BRONZE, San Francisco, California
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to be unique, and diffrent, and shine in your own way."
-Lady GaGa


As the days pass by
memories combine
creating a smile
fit for a king

The old days seem too at ease
with the smell of success,
in the breeze
leaving subdued thoughts
on the trail
leading to the perfect life



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on Aug. 26 2009 at 4:09 pm
LoVeWrItInG BRONZE, San Francisco, California
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to be unique, and diffrent, and shine in your own way."
-Lady GaGa

Your welcome. Thanks for commenting on mine. I am trying to get as many comments as possible because this is the first article I'v submitted.

Ian_S. GOLD said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 1:21 am
Ian_S. GOLD, Chappaqua, New York
12 articles 9 photos 8 comments
Its okay that the title is wrong. The poem is short and sweet. I like it. Thanks for commenting on my piece... It means a lot to me

on Aug. 25 2009 at 8:59 pm
LoVeWrItInG BRONZE, San Francisco, California
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to be unique, and diffrent, and shine in your own way."
-Lady GaGa

Sorry about the title. I put the wrong one in, and don't know how to change it.


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