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Why, is the word that keeps me worrying.
Why, am are we here?
Why ,does god keep us here when we don`t want to be here?
Why,do we have to do the things we don`t want to?
Why,do we have to go to school?
Why, does some teens kill them self?
Why,do we have to listen to our parents?
Why, do we all get in fights in our lives?
Why, is the word that keeps all of us kids or teens or everyone worrying........





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raindance72 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 16, 2011 at 5:05 pm

Angel,

You have a good idea and point of view, but your grammar and writing style could probably use a little tweaking.

For instance, instead of placing a comma after every "why", you could start a new line. Just a friendly suggestion, and good luck with your writing.

PS - I also love Chicken Soup books :)

 
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