What Is Forever Anyway?

August 6, 2009
By GlassHeart SILVER, Black Earth, Wisconsin
GlassHeart SILVER, Black Earth, Wisconsin
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You promised me forever
Told me that we’d never be apart
The words patched up my broken heart
But now our “love” will have to sever

Because now I know your poorly hidden lies
This was all just a game to you
I was just another new girl for you to break through
Only one part of me wants to say our goodbyes

Because the other parts of me still wants to believe
And hold onto your words by every hanging flesh of skin
Still believes that you meant those things from within
Because some part of me still loves you and doesn’t want you to leave

Now there is only thing I can think and say
I love you
What is forever anyway?


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on Jul. 6 2010 at 10:57 am
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
when you lie to someone you tell them thay are not worth the truth

wow varry good work! i love your stuff it rely has emoshen to it.  ( .... i dont think i spelt emosen right.....)

on Sep. 10 2009 at 8:35 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

i completely agree with dreamer_believer!

on Aug. 16 2009 at 5:57 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow :) great poem. the ending is great but the entire poem is good too :) you brought up an interesting question "what is forever". it caused me to think a lot. the poem style is something you don't see a lot anymore. so well done :)




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