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What Is Forever Anyway?

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You promised me forever
Told me that we’d never be apart
The words patched up my broken heart
But now our “love” will have to sever

Because now I know your poorly hidden lies
This was all just a game to you
I was just another new girl for you to break through
Only one part of me wants to say our goodbyes

Because the other parts of me still wants to believe
And hold onto your words by every hanging flesh of skin
Still believes that you meant those things from within
Because some part of me still loves you and doesn’t want you to leave

Now there is only thing I can think and say
I love you
What is forever anyway?



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Ashley P. said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 10:57 am:
wow varry good work! i love your stuff it rely has emoshen to it.  ( .... i dont think i spelt emosen right.....)
 
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writer24/7/365 said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 8:35 pm:
i completely agree with dreamer_believer!
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 16, 2009 at 5:57 pm:
wow :) great poem. the ending is great but the entire poem is good too :) you brought up an interesting question "what is forever". it caused me to think a lot. the poem style is something you don't see a lot anymore. so well done :)
 
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