My Story

August 6, 2009
By Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 45 comments

You wish you can fly,
Make your dreams fly high,
please don't cry,
look up in the sky,
'Cause when ever you need a hand,
you've got your family and your friends.

It's the best time in my life,
I've searched Mr. Right.

I won my fight,
I lost my right,
My enemies still bite.

Everything would be alright,
take the open doors on the right,
it's a message,
a message to a new life.

With butterflies, and rainbows,
full of green meadows,
and with my head up high,
thinkin' nothing but the sky,
my father sure is watching,
he sees me walking,
through the streets,
nothin' but cars and concrete.

Everyone says, "Hello",
no fights,
no threats,
But I would tell the world,
I care.

I care for my family, my life,
my closest friends,
and my father up above.



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on Sep. 24 2009 at 6:19 pm
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 45 comments
thank you very much! God Bless you

on Sep. 1 2009 at 1:03 pm
FashionGuru DIAMOND, Manhattan, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion, I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

Great work! This poem stands out to me especially because I too have lost a parent. Keep writing, your work is inspiring.

on Aug. 19 2009 at 1:28 am
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 45 comments
Thnak you alot :D God Bless :)

on Aug. 17 2009 at 10:45 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i have read a lot of your work, and you never seem to dissappoint me, yet this one is my fav :) i absolutely LOVE it. thanks for sharing. i wish i could give you more than 5 stars ;)




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