Rain

March 28, 2009
By Anonymous

I
am falling
into despair
like a raindrop
falls
and soon
goes splat
on the
harsh pavement
of life
SPLAT!


The author's comments:
Please don't get mad it isn't that good

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on Aug. 9 2009 at 12:12 am
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Don't worry, I won't get mad. In fact, I think it's beautiful and filled with truth. If you want to see some really bad poems then check out mine. (but they might not be up yet, since they're still pending) Don't get discouraged and keep writing!




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