Perfect Hands

July 27, 2009
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two hands
perfectly intertwined
forever together
by our sides

one darker
from the sun
mine on top
I know you're the one

my dad speaks up now
way too fast
he doesn't want us,
this thing, to last

he takes you away
the only one
my bright light
my forever sun

now I'm alone
we are no more
the perfect hands,
never together
my life is still





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George B. said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 1:03 am
Keep trying
 
crossrails This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 1:00 pm
found it for real now.
-thank you S.C.
 
crossrails This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 1:01 pm
i found it for real now.
-thank you SC
 
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