What you did to me;

March 16, 2009
By , Mesquite, TX
It is cold.
The room is dark.
His actions weren't bold,
Yet I still couldn't bark.

What happened was terrible
What happened was bad.
What happened was memorable
What happened was sad.

He told me I was beautiful,
He told me I was fine.
He told me that if no one
took me "you'd be mine."

Our hearts danced with each other.
And I was just another..

Another girl he would use.
Another girl he could abuse.
Someone else to pretend to like,
Someone else to playfully fight.
I tended to listen to him and think he was right
I tended to listen to him and my tongue i would bite.

I bit it in fear, in rage of myself
For I was just scared that it was me that would welt.
Welt oh so badly for the pain I felt.

pain for he took something from me.
Something so valuable, so breakable, so clean.

I was as white as snow before he met me.
And now I'm as colorful as the rainbow,which made me see.
how much one person can kill you with a fake knife,

And how much one person can
take someone's life.

you left me abandoned,
alone and confused.
you left me scared,
terrified and abused.

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ItsCourtneykidds said...
Aug. 9, 2009 at 9:33 pm
Well it is true, almost everything I write is based on past experiences.
Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 5:57 pm
Great poem, I actually believe it till i read the Author's Comments.
jadecat said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 1:52 am
I think that you can relate to all teenage girls with this, hopefully a lot of them will read it and take heed.
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