Change

July 27, 2009
By writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm


Change
a six letter word
which is both
dreaded
and longed for

When people promise
Big change
change for the poor
Change for the rich

a seed is planted
and hope begins to grow
Hope for tommorrow,
the offspring of yesterdays,

And we are willing to do,
whatever it takes
to make this world
a better place

never once,
have we looked at
the bigger picture
what is the cost?

are there better,
less
catastrophic and dramatic
ways?

I want to spend what i earn
working instead of playing
with my friends
and not
on a social securities fund
which I shall never see.

IS CHANGE REALLY THE BEST FOR YOU AND ME?


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on Feb. 26 2010 at 11:08 am
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
33 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

yep! lol i know right? this was the begining when i started posting on here, when i was still k whats everyone else writting about...lol

NOT NE MORE

on Jan. 25 2010 at 6:47 pm
Vanished BRONZE, Change, Colorado
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...surprised. The flickers of talent...the glimpse of a mind - fragile and incomplete - the hint of truth.

I am nearly...so closely...in the state of...admiration.

Yet, I could be a heartbreaker, hmm? Change...are you ready for it, love?

on Nov. 27 2009 at 7:00 pm
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun" -The Killers (Read My Mind)

"If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there." -George Harrison

I like it =)

on Nov. 9 2009 at 7:38 pm
AceInShadows SILVER, Vallejo, California
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Wow heh heh most of it's the hard truth and I like the rhythm and the way you end it with a rhyme

Heart SILVER said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 11:47 pm
Heart SILVER, Arcadia, California
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I. LOVE. IT. EVERYTHING ABOUT IT!!!

on Sep. 21 2009 at 6:02 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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hey, great poem! it's different and i love the little end rhyme. keep writing! (:

on Sep. 13 2009 at 9:44 am
PinkPrincess GOLD, Wellington, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
I think therefore I am

this poem is awesome nice work

on Sep. 8 2009 at 2:09 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
33 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

thank you!

on Sep. 4 2009 at 8:00 pm
Writerzhand GOLD, Ball Ground, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I wanna carry a piece of who I was before so when I hit the wall, I REALLY hit the wall.

This is really cool. It's a different spin on everything everyone thinks about. Great job!

on Jul. 30 2009 at 5:22 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
33 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

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