As I look.

July 23, 2009
As I look at this world,
I see it,
as thought it's covered in frosted glass.

As I listen to this world,
I hear it,
as a muffled sound.

As I walk around this world,
I slip on it,
as if it was icy.

As I live in this world,
I hurt,
as if someone is slowly killing me.

As I die in this world,
I smile,
because I'm finally saved.

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xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 29, 2009 at 8:55 pm
This is really good! All i can say is...WOW!
Torrzilla replied...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 5:50 pm
^_^ Thanks
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