Beautiful disaster

July 13, 2009
By Ariel_Berrot DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
Ariel_Berrot DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Like men we'll face the murderous, cowardly pack, pressed to the wall--Dying but fighting back." -Claude Mckay


three words that can simply change a conversation can just as easily change the world. thats just what we had -a changed conversation, that love would soon change the life of a girl. then one day it went down, no sign of rescue, but watching from the side it was a beautiful disaster. slowly at sunset when the damage was done, slowly they walked, each away from the other one. as painful as it was, i keep this memory, and pray to someday have, another beautiful disaster.


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dancestar GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 10:22 pm
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
BE WHO YOU WANNA BE NOT WHO OTHERS WANNA SEE!!!

it was really really gud..i love the idea...i agree wid kianapearl abt haaving it in poem form...otherwise jst truly amazin

kianapearl said...
on Jul. 20 2009 at 5:44 am
I really like this. I think it would be better, though, if it was presented in the form of a poem, rather than a paragraph. Very good work, though. Keep writing:)




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