Beautiful disaster

three words that can simply change a conversation can just as easily change the world. thats just what we had -a changed conversation, that love would soon change the life of a girl. then one day it went down, no sign of rescue, but watching from the side it was a beautiful disaster. slowly at sunset when the damage was done, slowly they walked, each away from the other one. as painful as it was, i keep this memory, and pray to someday have, another beautiful disaster.





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kianapearl said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 5:44 am
I really like this. I think it would be better, though, if it was presented in the form of a poem, rather than a paragraph. Very good work, though. Keep writing:)
 
dancestar replied...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 10:22 pm
it was really really gud..i love the idea...i agree wid kianapearl abt haaving it in poem form...otherwise jst truly amazin
 
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