His Smile

June 30, 2009
By brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
18 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
the only thing you have to do in life is die
music makes everything better


His smile melts me,
Warms me inside,
I wish he would save me save me,
Save me from my life,

The thought of him wakes me,
In the middle of the night,
From then on I think of him,
From the stars to daylight,

I think I might love him,
Who knows if he likes me,
In the future could we be
Together in destiny,

Does he only flirt with me,
When he is bored?
Because I'm the only girl around?

I really like him but I don't want to be burned,If this is a trap,
I've fallen into his laughter ,his smile,his walk, and his talk,

I think about him every day,
I let my mind wander,
In the future in the past could he love me at last??


The author's comments:
its about Caleb again

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on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:36 pm
Soft_spoken GOLD, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
if your feelings go away its not love
if that person
leaves an imprint on your heart that was love
only once
only one guy left a imprint on my heart like that i love him still -BY ME BRITTANY JENELLE

thanks for commenting my poems

this is reall really nice

 


on Sep. 26 2009 at 11:08 am
brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
18 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
the only thing you have to do in life is die
music makes everything better

i was then he went out with my friend I stopped loving him but i still like him

on Sep. 23 2009 at 4:25 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

you put my exact feelings into words. this is amazing. i was wondering... are you stuck on just one guy? because i'm the same.

on Jul. 9 2009 at 11:10 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

Very good. and i can also relate to it. btw, may not help but I've got some advice...make a move before you can't...!

on Jul. 9 2009 at 3:18 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

Exemely good job. I can relate to this even though I'm a 13 year old boy. I want you to check out basically a poem I wrote from a man piont of view of this poem called " The Girl I Stalked" Again you are a fantastic poet.

KLD1992 GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2009 at 10:46 pm
KLD1992 GOLD, Bradford, Massachusetts
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really good i can relate to it


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