Sadness Taking Over

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Sadness Taking Over
Its hard to think, to think and believe you are gone
i can't go to sleep
because i know if i do
i won't want to get back up
Wanting to cry hard, but cant
because I don’t want to sleep
because I know if I do I won’t get back up
I want to be up,
to think of you,
all our memories together
all our times together.
scared of going crazy, crazy over you being gone
afraid of having you slowly
fade away in my mind, my mind full of memories,
memories that we used to share And laugh about.
Everyday, as time passes by. You are in my mind
I can’t go to sleep
Because I know if I do….
I won’t want to get back up
Wanting to cry hard, but can’t
Because I always want you on my mind, while I’m awake.
Scared of forgetting you





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SilverDawn said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 6:05 pm
nice poem! and i love the repeated parts. it's full of feeling and i like it lots (:
 
KiraKira said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 10:02 pm
I love this! It's beautifully done, the feeling of longing is there. The only thing I think you might want to look into are the lower case "i"s in the first couple of lines. I don't know if that was intended...?
 
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