Sadness Taking Over

June 25, 2009
By Bianca Angaiak SILVER, Tununak, Alaska
Bianca Angaiak SILVER, Tununak, Alaska
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Sadness Taking Over
Its hard to think, to think and believe you are gone
i can't go to sleep
because i know if i do
i won't want to get back up
Wanting to cry hard, but cant
because I don’t want to sleep
because I know if I do I won’t get back up
I want to be up,
to think of you,
all our memories together
all our times together.
scared of going crazy, crazy over you being gone
afraid of having you slowly
fade away in my mind, my mind full of memories,
memories that we used to share And laugh about.
Everyday, as time passes by. You are in my mind
I can’t go to sleep
Because I know if I do….
I won’t want to get back up
Wanting to cry hard, but can’t
Because I always want you on my mind, while I’m awake.
Scared of forgetting you



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on Jul. 15 2009 at 6:05 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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nice poem! and i love the repeated parts. it's full of feeling and i like it lots (:

on Jul. 8 2009 at 10:02 pm
KiraKira PLATINUM, Cardiff By The Sea, California
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Favorite Quote:
Do not pity the dead, Harry. Pity the living, and above all, pity those who live without love -Albus Dumbledore

I love this! It's beautifully done, the feeling of longing is there. The only thing I think you might want to look into are the lower case "i"s in the first couple of lines. I don't know if that was intended...?




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