fire candy

June 19, 2009
By purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss


you are my fire candy
i cant get enough
though you scorch my throat
you are
my sweet yet hurtful candy
that will eventually
burn my heart
i love this candy
this fire candy
but it is killing me
and you are cremating my heart
right before you kill me


The author's comments:
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on Nov. 11 2009 at 3:08 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss

thank you! :)

on Nov. 11 2009 at 10:04 am
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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wow. that is unlike anythign ive ever read before. and kinda sick, but in a good true way. sorry. i sound odd XD great job

on Sep. 7 2009 at 11:00 am
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
7 articles 3 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss

thank you i like your poetry too.

im also a fan of edgar allen poe.

EdytD SILVER said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 9:13 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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This is actually neat. I think you could play with this, and almost describe your tongue, or your stomach, being burnt as the candy travels through your system. just an idea.

I'd love if you took a look at my poetry; thanks!

on Jul. 6 2009 at 11:21 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
7 articles 3 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss

i think this poem is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




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