I remember You see

June 29, 2009
By Nevre BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
Nevre BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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I remember the way the wind felt
As it brushed by with warm breath

I remember the sounds of the birds
The noise that creatures screamed

I remember the golden light
Burning in the blue above

I remember what you can see

I remember clouds and rain
Summers birth and winters freeze

I remember rushing waves
Spinning leaves and calm that waits

I remember what you can feel

I remember the way the wind felt
As it grasped with frozen fingers

I remember the sound of silence
The picture of untouched sleep

I remember the silver sphere
distant in the darker blue

I remember what you can smell
I remember what you can taste

Sweet
Bitter
Sour
Tangy
Soothing
Hypnotizing


I remember the human embrace
The touch of lips last caress

I remember the fire of Awake
The taste of love and the burn of pain

I remember life

I remember you can see
I am dead
As you will be


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on Aug. 6 2009 at 11:20 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

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