Hope she Remembers

June 16, 2009
By IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
53 articles 1 photo 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.


I’m going to go nuts
If I can’t see her again
I will always be hurt
Unless can see my friend

I knew her for a week
Some say that’s insane
But you can love someone
Even if you don’t know their full name

She was different you see
She wasn’t like the rest
But even with her differences
I knew she was the best

I don’t know if she remembers me
The little 12 year old who wanted to die
I don’t know her number, where she lives
Even if she’s alive

I felt she was what I needed
To turn her life around
But now that she’s gone
Emptiness is all I’ve found

So I hope she remembers
The little scrawny geek
I’m back with old friends
But she is the one I will always seek



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on Aug. 5 2009 at 9:57 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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aww, i love this! it's kinda cute, casual, and i love the loose rhymes. great rhythm too. keep writing (:

on Aug. 4 2009 at 9:47 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow this is really good. this explains how a lot of girls must feel about some of their friends. this poem to me made me remember some people like this so i like it a lot :) great job!! check out some of my work and comment! :)

Kumasskimo said...
on Jul. 28 2009 at 11:03 am
Hey.. uh thanks for commentin on one of my poems.. yea I like this.. its really gooood. ;)


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