ferris wheel

June 16, 2009
twilight cracks the dawn and seeps out the night. noises and lights blend into a gradually darker sky. it is the warm anticipation of the american dream at the ferris wheel.

I calm my excitement and sit it down towards a seat. I see you on the other seat. I don't see us. the hearts of you and her beat in sync at the ferris wheel.

the pitch black sky surrounds the lights and the noises as i feel a circular motion around me. at the top, her lips send warmth to yours at the ferris wheel.

Rides pass by me to places i never go. the amusements amuse the night sky surrounded by clouds of people. I never see you pass by her side, and you go by your ride with her at the ferris wheel.

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rainingcolor said...
Feb. 7, 2010 at 8:36 pm
That was really good! I LOVED IT.It sounds kinda like me in an ironic way because I've never been in a ferris wheel with someone special and then you see all the other people there and it makes you feel lonely...KEEP WRITING!!!
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