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American Dream MAG
so this is where all the dreaming takes me
to a cold, empty reality
with sleep still in my eyes
shivering, confused, I must’ve overslept
now it’s time to wake up
one last yawn, then face the lies
I’m barefoot and the streets are rough
paved with broken glass
but that’s okay
’cause the land is flowing
with milk and honey
bread and butter
and justice
if you just keep on going ...
© Hoang P., Rochester, NY
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byebye said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 8:48 pm
Great work! I love the rhythm and the language you used here. It's inspirational, really; and I loved it :)
Would anyone consider taking a look at (and maybe commenting?) on my poetry? I have three things in and really need feedback, thx!
ElleNicole BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:17 pm
Nice job. Check out my stuff?
DAN_CER_554 SILVER said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 5:54 pm
I thought it was good while i was reading it. It wasn't until the last line that i was like wow. It struck me and took my breath away. Amazing
JuneTaz said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 4:06 pm
Think your poem is really unique and realistic too. I especially like how the shortness left me thinking about it. Four stars!
ShadowKeeper BRONZE said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 3:45 pm
I loved the ending!! that is soo true!! Keep writing!!
ishmael_bishop SILVER said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 10:34 pm
Wow, after puttting things into perspective, I finally understand "American Dream". Great job!
A_____ said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 12:12 pm
At first I wasn't sure what I thought about this poem but when I read the ending, that sealed it for me. You did a really nice job!
bookwormjunkie said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 11:21 pm
OHH
ohheyyyelli SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 7:19 pm
I love this. Especially the ending. You're really talented!
Dancingchick BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 3:22 pm
This is beautiful, you write really well. Can you please comment on some of my work? I'd love to hear what you think. Keep writing!
hallie523 said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 11:13 pm
it's about immigrants coming to america in search of the "american dream" of prosperity and justice for all but finding a much harsher reality.
rubyrainstorm SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 4:48 pm
????????
RanaHewezi1998 SILVER said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 5:01 pm
wow dat is amazing
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