American Dream

At first I wasn't sure what I thought about this poem but when I read the ending, that sealed it for me.  You did a really nice job!

I love this. Especially the ending. You're really talented!

This is beautiful, you write really well. Can you please comment on some of my work? I'd love to hear what you think. Keep writing!

As a writer you want to have meaning and not just everyday laundry meaning, real meaning. Have a unique reason to write. If you want to say pretty things, that's good for yourself. But the world needs purpose.

This is really good. Awesome job!! Keep it up!

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Good job on the poem. It's great, and the imagery is simple, but effective. For that, I give you five stars. :)

WOW...5 stars all the way! :) This poem was amazingggg! I loved it so much! Also, if anyone has time, please check out and comment on my poem, The Girl Inside...THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)

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I love it. 

<3 love it!

i loved this!! and it was so nicely written!! :)

I loved it :) made me really reflect! i'm sort of a dark-poem kinda person, and i liked the line "one last yawn, then face the lies." greatt! :)

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The “American Dream” has many tenets, one of which is <a title="Skeptics doubt worth of homeownership as investment" http://personalmoneystore.com/moneyblog/2011/03/21/homeownership-skeptics/">homeownership</a>. A growing number of well qualified experts are starting to openly and notoriously challenge home ownership as an investment, as they assert it doesn't hold up to scrutiny as a severe investment. There's a mounting body of evidence the doubters are right.