Close My Eyes And Envision Yoiu

June 14, 2009
By SilentRaven BRONZE, Post Falls, Idaho
SilentRaven BRONZE, Post Falls, Idaho
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

My eyes are about to close

My life has come to an end

Almost there,

How long is a life spent

I see his eyes,oh, so gorgeous

His hair, a raven's black

Blood-thirsty,

You attack

Drain my blood

Cut me in two

Just to see

Her with you

So used to your sadness

And your anti-life way

I hope to myself

Things will be okay

I thought I could've been the one

Who makes you smile

Too bad I wont be seeing you

For a while



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Jun. 25 2009 at 5:03 pm
SilentRaven BRONZE, Post Falls, Idaho
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
that is basically it.....

arimas SILVER said...
on Jun. 23 2009 at 6:55 pm
arimas SILVER, Columbia, South Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 35 comments
holy god, that just hit me in my heart. thats, exactlyit.i lost my love 2 someone elseand no one, noteven my bffl could explain the way it feels. i guess u have 2 go through it. of course, if thats not wut ur poem is about, tell me. i suck at finding meaning. or getting it right when i do.


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!