But with the words in your mouth

June 11, 2009
By Lovely17 SILVER, Orlando, Florida
Lovely17 SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got, till it's gone."


You say that you love me
That I’m all you want,
But with the words in your mouth
I guess it’s not how I thought.
You hold me real close
And say to never let go,
But with the words in your mouth
It hit’s a hard blow.
You kiss me real softly
Saying you care,
But with the words in your mouth
It was like knifes in thin air.



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on Nov. 24 2009 at 11:58 am
Lovely17 SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got, till it's gone."

this one i tried to rhyme and styll have the one line focused on and styll fit in :] thanx for the response :]

on Nov. 23 2009 at 1:56 pm
Gatorpoet SILVER, Tavares, Florida
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Again I like how you rhyme the words, very unique style its great


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