hands to hold poem

May 30, 2009
By Maddie Gonzalez BRONZE, Urbandale, Iowa
Maddie Gonzalez BRONZE, Urbandale, Iowa
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I want you to hold my hand and never leave me or let get go,
Stay with me forever
So please don’t let go, please don’t let go

Never let go of my hand or my heart,

Stay with me forever

You said you would never let go of either

But sadly you have already left me standing here alone,

you left with out telling me good bye, there was nothing at all


So that’s is why even if there are a million people,

around me I feel so alone

I reach out just for your hand in the crowd but you never,
seem to see me anymore nor take my hand

You used to take my hand and tell me you love me

You used to say we would be together forever

But know I just always feel so alone,

now that you have left me.

The author's comments:
this poem was written after i was in a serious realtaionship that fell apart because he turned out to be a really hurtful and negitive person and im all about being positive

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This article has 3 comments.

on Jun. 20 2009 at 1:36 am
dirtbiker2012 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
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this poem is very good! i kno how you feel!

kenzie said...
on Jun. 18 2009 at 1:06 am
this was a great poem and i really lked it.

Lynette BRONZE said...
on Jun. 17 2009 at 4:25 am
Lynette BRONZE, Rio Grande, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“Love is when the other person's happiness is more important than your own.”
H. Jackson Brown,Jr.

I know how you feel.......

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